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Olfactory Poetry

I have heard that the sense of smell is one of our most rudimentary senses, and that it connects to our more obscured thoughts. The design of the exercise is to have a bunch of herbs and other smelly things. And to select one, and sit with it for a bit, and make notes on the thoughts that come to mind. Bill brought me in some fennel, oregano, rosemary, nasturtium and gardenia. I thought I would chose the gardenia, since they grew around our house in Port Arthur, but no, I selected the nasturtium. (maybe this means that I should include color with the smelly things?)

The smell took me back to a particular long childhood afternoon that lingers for whatever reason. I was personally surprised at the pleasure I got from just putting aside that time to be with me, and to go quietly into the experience without the nagging sense of I really do need to get that Degree Plan in the Mail today, and I really do need to dust, and my brother wants me to enter some competition that has a deadline today and ... etc ...

The poetry exercise is very refreshing. It is good to permit myself to be alone with my thoughts, and then to let the thoughts go. To study the flower carefully and jot down my observations, the uncensored thoughts that came to my mind. If I do them right, it is like the kind visit home I always wish I could have.

Nasturtium

How we rush past the miracle of the nasturtium
in search of things not orange
A Nike bruises a leaf, flat and peltate
The air is filled with sweet pungence
We pause to consider
the trailing nasturtium

Nasturtium from the Middle English nasturcium,
a kind of cress, from Latin nasturtium :
perhaps nâsus, nose + tortâre, to twist
to twist the nose

And I am reminded of shady August corners
Saint Augustine grass
Caladium
water sprinklers
and time
time to decide
whether my nose is being twisted
whether I like:
    That spice that mingles with that sweet smell perfumeries never mimic
the pale veiney underside of the petals
or the bright crinkled orange
    orange so vibrant it dances
    out
    out beyond the rim of the petals

The top pair of petals are marked with maroon lines
lines that lead past orange feathering
past anthers frosted with sunshine pollen
down deep into a pale green infinity
where there is time
time to consider
Nasturtiums

      Jean Emerson
      August 30, 1998

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